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Post by RIKU on Jul 22, 2009 18:57:04 GMT -5
Character Name: Ryo Lune Character Rank: Jonin Link to Accepted Profile: narutodivinexx.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedcharacter&action=display&thread=171
Jutsus ( 22/30 ): Basics: Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique] Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill] Kinobori [Tree Climbing] Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking] Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release]
Advanced:
Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.
Suiton: Jouka [Water Release: Cleanse] Rank: D Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: After the user forms a few hand seals they concentrate and convert a small amount of chakra in their eyes into water. The small amount of water causes their eyes to tear and rid themselves of any irritating substances like sand or powder.
Suiton: Rokujou [Water Release: Poseidon’s Anger] Rank: D Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: After performing the set of handseals, all water sources nearby begin to ripple and progressively get worse until they begin making violent waves, vicious currents or both. This jutsu is not an attack as such but makes moving about in water (such as Suimen or Swimming) almost impossible because of the effects.
Suiton: Shiryoku [Water Release: Sight] (Doujutsu) Rank: D Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: The user is able to see light without it being bent by water. This allows them to see through a mist, or to the bottom of a pond with no trouble.
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu [Water Clone Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user. When this clone disperses, it reverts into a splash of water.
* Special Notes * - Each bunshin can take up to 1/10 of your chakra pool to make. - Training to halve chakra consumption results in you being able to choose between giving it 1/20 to 1/10 of your chakra. - Bunshin can only travel a moderate distance from the user - Bunshin have 1/10 the power of the user. This includes weapons, items, powers, speed, reaction speed, etc. - Elemental Bunshin can perform taijutsu, non-elemental jutsu, and elemental jutsu of its own element that the user knows. Note however, that an elemental clone only has as much chakra as the user gave it, and some of it is used to maintain the clone. Attempting to use a jutsu the clone no longer has enough chakra, which will cause the bunshin to burst without the jutsu being performed. - Will disperse after a single hit or upon the user's command.
Mizu Shunshin no Jutsu [Water Body Flicker Technique] Rank: C Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: The user will be able to disappear from their previous position with a splash of water and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use, though they must travel more than 2 miles, and know exactly where they are going. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, or to leave a thread entirely. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, meaning you can't start a battle with it either.
Mayomeru [Purify] Rank: C Requirements: Water. Type: Ninjutsu Description: The user places their hands on a surface of water and causes all man-harmful impurities to be removed from it. This makes the water suitable for human usage and probably more easy to manipulate by Suiton.
Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Rank: C Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Suiton: Ame Yose no Jutsu [Water Release: Rain Summoning technique] Rank: B Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: This is for use in areas with little or no water. The object of this jutsu is to bring water to you. By performing a number of seals, and focusing ones chakra into the ground, water within a given area, depending on ones chakra strength and water control, will be condensed and begin to form clouds. Once this is complete the clouds then proceed to the selected area, causing a down pour bringing the water to the user. There must be at least some water in the immediate area, and this technique does take a while, so it is hard to bring a sufficient amount in a short time, unless one has the element of surprise.
Suiton: Mizu Kabe [Water Release: Water Wall] Rank: B Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: This jutsu gives the user the ability to create a defensive wall of water through doing a string of hand seals. The wall may be blown out as jet of water from the user's mouth that forms into a barricade or even gush out of the ground. However, it's more usual to use a source of water to make this technique less draining. This wall is thick enough to easily stop projectiles no matter what size they are.
Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri [Water Release: Rising Water Cutter] Rank: B Requirements: Water Environment Type: Ninjutsu Description: With the handseals of this jutsu done with, the user will then stomp his foot on the water, causing a vertical slicing blade of water to rise up and travel towards his target instead of the usual splash of water.
Dokuton: Hiroku Fukyuu Hiru [Poison Release: Wide Spread Leech] Rank: A Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: Plainly put, the user spreads an immense amount of chakra to all directions causing plant life to shrivel and die, water to start polluting and for the animal life to flee away. The chakra sent out acts much like a poison to the environment. This has no real affect on the animals and people since they can repel the poisonous chakra.
Saisei no Saibou [Cell Regeneration] Rank: A (Kinjutsu) Requirement: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses nearly all of their chakra into one part of their body just before an attack. The moment that attack connects, the chakra activates the natural regeneration of the body's cellular makeup, repairing the damage done by an attack the moment after it is done. An extremely powerful jutsu, it uses almost all of the ninja's chakra and stamina. Even though this jutsu can save the user from death, they will certainly not able to continue a battle in this condition.
Jutsu Shou [Technique Neutralize] Rank: S (Kinjutsu) Requirements: None. Type: Ninjutsu Description: This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It takes a large amount of concentration and thus usually only capable of being done by a Kage or a very skilled Jonin. This can Neutralize any jutsu up to B rank.
Rain Tiger at Will Technique (雨虎自在の術, Ukojizai no Jutsu) Rank: No rank, Supplementary, All ranges Type: Ninjutsu Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with Pain's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to Pain's senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of the village, the existence of the intruder can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until Pain uses the seal to cancel it. Pain makes it rain every Sunday in Amegakure, or whenever he has to leave the village.
[b]Jutsus ( 22/30 ):[/b] [i]Basics:[/i] [b]Bunshin no Jutsu[/b] [Clone Technique] [b]Henge no Jutsu[/b] [Transformation Technique] [b]Kawarimi no Jutsu[/b] [Body Switch Technique] [b]Nawanuke no Jutsu[/b] [Rope Untying Skill] [b]Kinobori[/b] [Tree Climbing] [b]Suimen Hokou no Gyou[/b] [Art of Water Walking] [b]Genjutsu Kai[/b] [Genjutsu Release]
[b]Advanced:[/b]
Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.
Suiton: Jouka [Water Release: Cleanse] [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] After the user forms a few hand seals they concentrate and convert a small amount of chakra in their eyes into water. The small amount of water causes their eyes to tear and rid themselves of any irritating substances like sand or powder.
Suiton: Rokujou [Water Release: Poseidon’s Anger] [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] After performing the set of handseals, all water sources nearby begin to ripple and progressively get worse until they begin making violent waves, vicious currents or both. This jutsu is not an attack as such but makes moving about in water (such as Suimen or Swimming) almost impossible because of the effects.
Suiton: Shiryoku [Water Release: Sight] (Doujutsu) [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] The user is able to see light without it being bent by water. This allows them to see through a mist, or to the bottom of a pond with no trouble.
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu [Water Clone Technique] [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user. When this clone disperses, it reverts into a splash of water. [color=Red] * Special Notes *[/color] - Each bunshin can take up to 1/10 of your chakra pool to make. - Training to halve chakra consumption results in you being able to choose between giving it 1/20 to 1/10 of your chakra. - Bunshin can only travel a moderate distance from the user - Bunshin have 1/10 the power of the user. This includes weapons, items, powers, speed, reaction speed, etc. - Elemental Bunshin can perform taijutsu, non-elemental jutsu, and elemental jutsu of its own element that the user knows. Note however, that an elemental clone only has as much chakra as the user gave it, and some of it is used to maintain the clone. Attempting to use a jutsu the clone no longer has enough chakra, which will cause the bunshin to burst without the jutsu being performed. - Will disperse after a single hit or upon the user's command.
Mizu Shunshin no Jutsu [Water Body Flicker Technique] [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] The user will be able to disappear from their previous position with a splash of water and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use, though they must travel more than 2 miles, and know exactly where they are going. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, or to leave a thread entirely. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, meaning you can't start a battle with it either.
Mayomeru [Purify] [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Requirements:[/b] Water. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] The user places their hands on a surface of water and causes all man-harmful impurities to be removed from it. This makes the water suitable for human usage and probably more easy to manipulate by Suiton.
Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Suiton: Ame Yose no Jutsu [Water Release: Rain Summoning technique] [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] This is for use in areas with little or no water. The object of this jutsu is to bring water to you. By performing a number of seals, and focusing ones chakra into the ground, water within a given area, depending on ones chakra strength and water control, will be condensed and begin to form clouds. Once this is complete the clouds then proceed to the selected area, causing a down pour bringing the water to the user. There must be at least some water in the immediate area, and this technique does take a while, so it is hard to bring a sufficient amount in a short time, unless one has the element of surprise.
Suiton: Mizu Kabe [Water Release: Water Wall] [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] This jutsu gives the user the ability to create a defensive wall of water through doing a string of hand seals. The wall may be blown out as jet of water from the user's mouth that forms into a barricade or even gush out of the ground. However, it's more usual to use a source of water to make this technique less draining. This wall is thick enough to easily stop projectiles no matter what size they are.
Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri [Water Release: Rising Water Cutter] [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Requirements:[/b] Water Environment [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] With the handseals of this jutsu done with, the user will then stomp his foot on the water, causing a vertical slicing blade of water to rise up and travel towards his target instead of the usual splash of water.
Dokuton: Hiroku Fukyuu Hiru [Poison Release: Wide Spread Leech] [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] Plainly put, the user spreads an immense amount of chakra to all directions causing plant life to shrivel and die, water to start polluting and for the animal life to flee away. The chakra sent out acts much like a poison to the environment. This has no real affect on the animals and people since they can repel the poisonous chakra.
Saisei no Saibou [Cell Regeneration] [b]Rank:[/b] A (Kinjutsu) [b]Requirement:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses nearly all of their chakra into one part of their body just before an attack. The moment that attack connects, the chakra activates the natural regeneration of the body's cellular makeup, repairing the damage done by an attack the moment after it is done. An extremely powerful jutsu, it uses almost all of the ninja's chakra and stamina. Even though this jutsu can save the user from death, they will certainly not able to continue a battle in this condition.
Jutsu Shou [Technique Neutralize] [b]Rank:[/b] S (Kinjutsu) [b]Requirements:[/b] None. [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It takes a large amount of concentration and thus usually only capable of being done by a Kage or a very skilled Jonin. This can Neutralize any jutsu up to B rank.
Rain Tiger at Will Technique (雨虎自在の術, Ukojizai no Jutsu) [b]Rank:[/b] No rank, Supplementary, All ranges [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Description:[/b] A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with Pain's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to Pain's senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of the village, the existence of the intruder can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until Pain uses the seal to cancel it. Pain makes it rain every Sunday in Amegakure, or whenever he has to leave the village.
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Post by Pwn on Jul 23, 2009 12:57:57 GMT -5
HEALING HANDS TECHNIQUE: Denied. This is basically this technique (which is a A-rank) plus you'd have to be a Iryō-nin (lit. Medical-nin) to do something like this.
POISON EXTRACTION TECHNIQUE: Denied. You're not a Iryō-nin (lit. Medical-nin).
FIELD STITCHING: Denied. You're not a Iryō-nin (lit. Medical-nin) plus this seems kinda Kakuzu specific (even though it's custom to you).
CHAKRA DETECTING RAIN: Denied. It's God Realm (Pain) specific.
POISON RELEASE - WIDE SPREAD LEECH: I don't see how this would just magically kill plant life, pollute water, and make animals run away. Plus you didn't even explain the effects on humans making this pretty useless to your enemy/victim. Please explain.
CELL REGENERATION: Using all of your chakra would kill you alone so please modify it to where it uses most of it.
TECHNIQUE NEUTRALIZE: Hm, better place a rank limit on this (such as certain rank techniques it can neutralize). I suggest B-Rank and lower. Please modify.
Please remove all the denied techniques from both the original and code form.
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Post by RIKU on Jul 23, 2009 14:04:41 GMT -5
>.> sorta, but my healing hands only healed a small amount and it only healed external wounds like gashes cuts and such.
>.>you accepted my history which has mention of small medical training, but i really don't care. All the medical jutsu are removed.
The other stuff specified. Also the chakra leach has no effect on real people or animals. Only the environment.
o.o Now the only thing I will argue about: the Chakra detecting rain. I understand it's pain specific; however mine is much less powerful, covers less of a range and costs me an A rank of chakra.
>.> I can't make it rain everywhere. I will even state a range if that helps my case. We can say i created a way to mimic Pain's jutsu, but since I'm not Pain my range fails. Not only that, for Pain he could make it rain for almost no chakra, mine is at the upper part of my arsenal. Meaning it takes a hell of a lot of chakra for me to do this.
It's not like I'm asking for the Mangekyo Sharingan. Just raindrops... for the Ruler of Amegakure... Village Hidden in the rain...
Also, if you want a reason as to why my character would learn it. If you saw a technique that someone could use to watch over the village wouldn't you try to mimic it. Also... without the rain once a week from Pain why is it called the rain village. Believe me i have my reasons for getting a Pain specific jutsu and not calling it the same thing, because it's not. It's my character attempting to mimic a Ruler from the past. Much like our rulers do with the successful rulers in the real world.
>.> also, since we don't know if it's clan specific or not and i argued with Rei. I now have Rei's permission... Epic win.
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Post by Pwn on Jul 23, 2009 14:46:28 GMT -5
ACCEPTED! this techniques has been moved to the ACCEPTED JUTSU.
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