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Post by TENMA KATAI on Jul 18, 2009 16:41:18 GMT -5
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[b]Character Name[/b]:Tenma, Katai
[b]Character Rank[/b]: Kage
[b]Link to Accepted Profile[/b]: http://narutodivinexx.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedcharacter&action=display&thread=70
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[i]Gekido no Tenma[/i] - The Gekido no Tenma is a bloodline that is dangerous in both to the enemy and to the person using it. The first sign of change is the eyes. The become black and golden, the spot varying for each member. The Gekido no Tenma increases the agility and the strength of members, sometimes one more then the other. The increase however is based on the skill level, as that leads into how much power one person can handle. From there, it splits into two more stages.
In stage two, the Tenma clan member have their agility and strength increased within themselves. Along with that, their senses have been heightened, by some extent. They react faster, and will hit harder.
In stage 3, the Tenma member is a beast, speedy and destructive. They are only able to be seen by the best of eyes and stopped by strong defenses. They are like animals, unable to be reasoned with.
However, with each stage, there is a limit. At most, Any Tenma clan member would/could last a whole day up to Stage 3. At Stage 3, with most Tenma clan members, It would last 3 hours at best.
Stage 1: Little
Stage 2: Medium
Stage 3: Large[/blockquote]
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Post by Pwn on Jul 18, 2009 16:56:22 GMT -5
GEKIDO NO TENMA: I need you to cover a few things in the Stage One description. When you say "increases the agility and the strength of members, sometimes one more then the other" is this based off chakra capacity/skill level or what? I see no problems with Stage Two or Stage Three.
Overall add to the description for Stage One and that'll be it.
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Post by TENMA KATAI on Jul 18, 2009 16:58:08 GMT -5
Finished
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Post by Pwn on Jul 18, 2009 17:01:57 GMT -5
Please provide a profile link and place this KG in code form, under the original form.
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